Carlyndra's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[hypnotoad]

This is so stupid. You can't even consider it a game, plus I'm pretty sure th--ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOTOAD!!!

[White Random]

I very much enjoy this game! The only thing I would change is maybe adding more contrast. Sometimes the background and objects blend together too much.

Level 25 glitches:
If you drop the bomb through the hole on the right side, it disappears and the screen turns nearly all white. I thought this was a part of the game until I watched the walkthrough for the level. Adding to that, after the bomb has been dropped, there is an invisible square in the area above the door that can be jumped through and sat on top off.

Playing further I've found a bunch more "invisible boxes" that you can jump through and stand on. I'm not sure if this is a intentional or not, but I'm leaning towards it being a glitch.

Also, is the end screen supposed to be just a blue sky with some clouds and no buttons?

Fun Fact: Both Level 18 and Level 23 can be completed without using the bombs, but you receive a lower score (whereas I think we should be rewarded for resourcefulness). Level 26 can be completed using only one.

KotubukiMedia responds:

Wow! Thanks for the lengthy review! Appreciate it! =)

[Robots vs Zombies 2]

Going to be writing as I play.

Possible typo in the tutorial. It says "You must to save at least one core." This doesn't make sense in the context. I think it's supposed to be "You must t̶o̶ save at least one core." However, I could be mistaken.
Minor typo: At the end of the tutorial it says "Good luck, Commander!." The period at the end is unnecessary.
Another typo is under the skills category. Bounty Hunter says "destroing" instead of "destroying."

It never explains what UP stands for but I figured it out eventually.

I didn't know that, in the first level, different tiles didn't do anything. I thought maybe the gray tiles with the stars did something special but they didn't, they are just for decoration.

In all of the descriptions for weapons and skills it give the stats for each particular item or skill. There are a lot of stats that I'm unsure of what they mean or what they affect. I suggest making a guide for each stat (critical, core damage, splash, etc.) describing what it does. Adding on to that say what each category (missile, global, AC towers, laser towers, etc) refer to.

I am unable to sell or upgrade any of my Light Artillery Towers.

Oh gosh, the freezing is annoying.

HP is useless because it never goes down. I've walked through enemies unharmed no problem. The Boss doesn't even hurt me.

Seriously what does "splash" mean? And what's the difference between Area and Range?

Overall it's a great game. I know it's good because I've wasted nearly half a day playing it, lol.

Just fix some of the glitches, make a guide for the terms used, and maybe have a beta test it out just to look for typos.

Badim responds:

Tnx! I`m now fixing it =)

[Dress Up Tomato Soup]

Another parody of dress up games? Awesomesauce!

I take it that you're making fun of dress up games, yes?

TastyPotion responds:

Of course. Thanks for giving me 5 stars! :D

[Virtual Rock]

Rock is mean D=
Maybe he needs some more water...

[Wonderland Days Sim Date]

This game is almost completely perfect!
My only wish is that you can change your hair and eye color in the beginning.
But other than that it was absolutely perfect! Exactly what I was looking to play. You were able to make me care about these characters and that's the main reason why I love this game so much.
Nearly cried at some of the endings, I did. I'm thinking about maybe making my boyfriend play this because he needs *ahem* a little extra help in the romance department, lol.

Beautiful work. There needs to be more games out there like this one for us ladies.
<3

[Goliath The Soothsayer]

Note to self: Stop playing these games in a dark room lit only by your computer screen while you are wearing headphones are will be going to bed soon.

[Exmortis 2]

WHY THE FUDGE DO I KEEP PLAYING THESE GAMES?

They scare the crap out of me.
...
Well, I'm off to play Exmortis 3!
(Why do I have the feeling that I'm going to die young of a heart attack...?)

[Zelda the Welder]

Very cute game. I'm going to write my review while I play so I can cover everything.

-In the beginning dialogue, sometimes the speech bubble says Zelda is saying something when it is obviously the Angry Customer, and it says that she is talking when it is (less obviously) the Nurse talking.
-The cursor is too large. If I have to move my mouse down and to the right, it covers the line so I can't see it
-During the tutorial part it would be nice if your time was paused while reading the instructions. I ran out of time too fast because most of it was spent reading through everything.
-The lines are really small, as someone else pointed out. Along with the big cursor it makes this game very frustrating.
-If you could label each tool with text instead of just a picture, that would be helpful to those who maybe don't know what something like a welder looks like.
-It would also be nice if you could add a line that shows up as you draw so you know where you are and have been on the welding line

This could just be user error, but whenever I try to weld the middle wires in the watch in the first level it says that I made a mistake and have to start over. Even when I zoomed in really close to see better and I knew for sure that I was still on the line, it said I made a mistake. Someone else mentioned mot being ale to finish the last trigger on a different level so I'm assuming that they are experiencing the same problem. My guess is that refreshing the game will temporarily solve the problem as it doesn't seem to be a bug on this specific level. Just refreshed the page. There doesn't seem to be a "skip" button for the opening dialogue so now I have to go through it all again. The dialogue is quite long so I can imagine people will become annoyed with having to click through it every time they start this game. Refreshing the page did not fix the problem for me so I cannot advance farther into the game.

I had to zoom in my screen really close in places because, again, the lines are small and the cursor too big. Thank goodness you used vectors so when I zoomed in it wasn't pixelated...

I really like the concept of the game, You could have just made it a straight up welding game but I appreciate that you actually gave it a story.The artwork was cute, although I don't understand why it was smooth looking in some places but really rough (almost like it was a lower resolution) in other places (i.e. the characters). This is probably just a stylistic thing.

It's a 3.5 for now, but I'll be checking back to see any updates you make. When you fix some of the issues in your game (weld it if you have to =P ), I'll gladly bump it up to a 5.
Keep up te good work!

[Scale of the Universe 2]

I feel so insignificant...